Sunday, 18 March 2018

Hope amid despair


That's the story of every fresh morrow,
Listening to the birds singing the anthem of sorrow.
But a divine hope lits the heart's dim corner,
And there's a consoling whisper,
That one fine day,
A miracle will turn the tables, bloodshed will totally perish,
Peace, happiness and serenity will bloom and flourish.
And the eyes that encounter trauma and fear everyday,
Will eventually be guided to the illuminating way.



8 comments:

  1. The title of your poem suggests that you will talk about hope in times of hardship, and you do talk about it. Yes I agree that the belief in divine spirit always keeps you hopeful. But why are you distressed each and everyday ?? It doesn't seem that you will ever find a peaceful day again because every fresh morrow has the birds singing the anthem of sorrow... Your grief is never ending.... It can't be related to at least my life.

    If u are talking about paradise, plz mention it.. Cause the never ending sorrow increases my blood pressure n I believe in simple cycles of happiness and sorrow of life.


    You wrote great . keep writing... Keep making wonderful contents ....

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    1. Thank u so much for sharing your views and appreciating... The fact is, this poem depicts the condition of Syrians and other innocent beings who suffer everyday.No way relates to my life😄

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  2. Hope amid dispair in the promised land " could have been title then :)

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    1. Yeah.. Actually It was titled in rush and I wanted to keep it compact

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  3. The idea is to specify the place in any way u want... Cause when I read , I don't not know your thoughts.. So u should convey it through words....I think

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    1. Hmmmm I've got your point...Actually I didn't know there was so much of ambiguity...well, such criticisms are always welcomed with open arms... Thank you

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  4. Very nice and wonderfully written... It truly shows the current mindset of Syrian people. I agree with the brave lover that the place should me mentioned.

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    1. Thank u so much Dilwar bhaiya...I too agree, but while writing the poem I kept myself in their place so it ain't so specifically mentioned.. But these small yet important things will be taken care In Shaa Allah

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